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Submitted by
Assigned_Reviewer_2
Q1: Comments to author(s).
First provide a summary of the paper, and then address the following
criteria: Quality, clarity, originality and significance. (For detailed
reviewing guidelines, see
http://nips.cc/PaperInformation/ReviewerInstructions)
The authors considered blind (i.e., unsupervised)
calibration of hardware implementation of compressive sensing. They
extended the approximate message passing algorithm (AMP) used in
compressive sensing to the case of blind calibration, and hence proposed
the calibration-AMP algorithm. The authors performed numerical simulation
on synthetic data to demonstrate the superiority of the proposed
calibration-AMP algorithm.
My main concern of the paper is that
the advantage of the proposed method is not convinicingly demonstrated. No
theoretic results are offered (although admitedly this is often difficult
for Bayesian methods), and simulations results are restricted to synthetic
data.
Secondly, as the author menthioned, the derivation of the
algorithm largely follows previous literature [12,13,14,15], and hence the
contribution is mostly adapting previous methods to a new problem, and
appears to be incremental.
It also appears, in my opinion, that
the paper is not a typical machine learning paper (e.g., no paper from
major machine learning conferences/journals appears in the reference
list). But this is a minor point. Q2: Please summarize
your review in 1-2 sentences
My main concern of the paper is that the advantage of
the proposed method is not convinicingly demonstrated. No theoretic
results are offered (although admitedly this is often difficult for
Bayesian methods), and simulations results are restricted to synthetic
data.
I have taken into accout the author
feedback. Submitted by
Assigned_Reviewer_5
Q1: Comments to author(s).
First provide a summary of the paper, and then address the following
criteria: Quality, clarity, originality and significance. (For detailed
reviewing guidelines, see
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The paper considers an extension of the standard
compressed sensing (CS) problem. Whereas usually we are given y=Ax and
wish to recover x, here we assume that y=Ax+noise(theta) and we wish to
recover both x and theta (i.e. the noise parameters). A graphical model s
constructed (figure 1) and BP is run on the graphical model. Similar to
the recently proposed AMP approach to CS, the BP equations can be shown to
simplify into Gaussian message passing. The main result of the paper is
that empirically, the BP approach works very well (close to the
theoretical limit and better than L1 minimization).
I think this
paper could be interesting to people who work on analyzing BP (of which
there are quite a few in the nips community) since it shows a nice
empirical result on a very dense graphs with many loops. Of course given
the success of AMP for the standard CS problem, this empirical result is
not all that surprising, but I am happy to see people exploring the extent
to which the AMP success is limited to CS.
The main drawback of
the paper is that given the AMP results for CS, the novelty here is rather
limited. This is a small extension of the approach that was used for the
standard CS problem.
Another weakness is that unlike the AMP
results for CS, here all the phase transitions are calculated empirically.
In other words, there is no proof that BP will solve the problem correctly
for the "white" part of the phase diagram. In the standard AMP there are
also "state evolution" equations that can be used to prove the phase
diagram but the authors defer this derivation to future work.
Q2: Please summarize your review in 1-2 sentences
Interesting empirical success of BP on a very dense
graph with many loops. Limited novelty given the AMP results for CS and no
proof of correctness. Submitted by
Assigned_Reviewer_6
Q1: Comments to author(s).
First provide a summary of the paper, and then address the following
criteria: Quality, clarity, originality and significance. (For detailed
reviewing guidelines, see
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The authors provide a nice reconstruction algorithm
for compressed sensing in the presence of distortions. It is a minor
generalization of previous work but appears more useful in applications
that are sometimes encountered. QUALITY: The authors address an
important problem and provide a good solution. The algorithmic development
seems sound, though I did not check the details. CLARITY: The writing
is quite clear, except for the omitted derivation of their algorithm.
However, they are quite pressed for space, and I think they have made a
reasonable compromise. I would like to see further explanation but I will
investigate some of the references they provide. Nonetheless, several more
explanatory lines would be warranted for non-experts, and could readily be
fit in by using more two-column formatting for their equations and scaling
the vertical axis of a figure or two. ORIGINALITY: This work appears
to be incremental progress on using message passing algorithms for
compressed sensing, but it seems to be a useful compromise of speed and
generality (general distortions, but less uncertainty than in dictionary
learning). SIGNIFICANCE: It seems likely that some researchers will
use their algorithm in solving practical problems.
Lines 150-151
have an error, because the marginal distribution over the signal
components and the distortion parameters are identical. Lines 181-182
have been too abbreviated. The assumptions and consequences should be
spelled out more. Line 228: The running time may be comparable to GAMP
but I don't know what that running time is. The relevant goodness should
be better explained.
I would like to see some evidence that their
algorithm is successful with non-product distortions, as they only compare
their performance to that of existing algorithms on particular convex
problems.
Q2: Please summarize your review in 1-2
sentences
The authors provide a nice reconstruction algorithm
for compressed sensing in the presence of distortions. It is a minor
generalization of previous work but appears more useful in applications
that are sometimes encountered. Submitted by
Assigned_Reviewer_7
Q1: Comments to author(s).
First provide a summary of the paper, and then address the following
criteria: Quality, clarity, originality and significance. (For detailed
reviewing guidelines, see
http://nips.cc/PaperInformation/ReviewerInstructions)
The "blind calibration" problem involves a
compressed sensing problem where, when observing a M-dimensional
measurement of N-dimensional sparse signals x_1,x_2,..., each of the M
measurement sensors is distorted in some parametrized way, where the
parameter can vary over the sensors. Therefore the goal is to be able to
recover these distortion parameters d_1,...,d_M at the same time as
estimating the sparse signals.
This paper proposes an effective
message-passing algorithm "C-AMP" to solve the two problems
simultaneously. The authors use a simple dimensionality argument to derive
a lower bound alpha_min on the sampling ratio alpha=(measurement dimension
M)/(signal dimension N), which is needed for recovery to be possible. In
the simulation results, C-AMP performs very well, with successful signal
recovery nearly everywhere above the threshold max{alpha_CS,alpha_min}
where alpha_CS is the phase transition for ordinary compressed sensing
(i.e. the setting where there are no unknown calibration parameters). In
contrast, L1 minimization (which does not take the calibration issue into
account) does not perform nearly as well.
I did find the initial
presentation of the problem to be somewhat confusing. Because blind
calibration is presented after background is given on supervised
calibration, it gives the impression that the goal is again the estimation
of the distortion parameters d_mu, rather than signal recovery (the sparse
x_l's). It would perhaps be clearer to say something like, "Given a sparse
signal recovery problem, if we were not able to previously estimate the
distortion parameters via supervised calibration, we will need to estimate
the unknown signals and the unknown distortion parameters simultaneously -
this is known as blind calibration."
Other comments...
-- 062:
z_{\mu l} should be z_{\mu}?
-- 063-064: not clear if w is the
noise or w is noise+z? I assume that w is the noise Delta; might be
clearer to say "one usually considers an iid Gaussian noise with variance
Delta, which will then be added to z". Also there is an extra "one" in
this sentence.
-- 101-102: this is hard to follow. Perhaps specify
what is rho.
-- 108: "the use if AMP" - > "the use of AMP"
-- 132: very nice intuitive derivation of the lower bound
-- equation in line 146 is very clear and easy to read; in-line
equations in lines 178-180 are harder to read & understand
--
149: "Z" is not the best notation for the normalizing constant since "z"
is used for something unrelated
-- 158-159: "NPM messages" and "PM
messages" should maybe be "pairs of messages" since ther are m's and
\tilde{m}'s?
-- 263-264: This line is a bit awkward to read,
perhaps rewrite
-- 268-269: not sure what it means to have a
uniform distribution with a mean & variance parameter - I assume it
means that sigma^2 determines the width of the interval, i.e. the width is
chosen such that variance is equal to sigma^2? This is an unusual
parametrization and it might be easier to just give the width itself.
-- 300: what is the green line in the central figure?
--
380: these figures & results are very clear. It might be nice to
discuss alpha_min a bit more - give some intuition for how alpha_min is
not a phase transition, since alpha_CS sometimes lies above alpha_min in
these figures; perhaps the maximum of alpha_min and alpha_CS functions as
a phase transition? Or is there some single bound that might unite the
two?
-- I think it's more standard, in phase transition diagrams,
to use light regions to indicate successful signal recovery and dark
regions when the signal cannot be recovered. Q2: Please
summarize your review in 1-2 sentences
The paper gives an effective message-passing algorithm
to address the blind calibration problem, where we would like to recover
sparse signals from lower-dimensional measurements, but these measurements
themselves need to be calibrated. The algorithm is very effective in
simulations and fits closely to a lower bound that is derived with a
simple dimensionality argument. Submitted by
Assigned_Reviewer_8
Q1: Comments to author(s).
First provide a summary of the paper, and then address the following
criteria: Quality, clarity, originality and significance. (For detailed
reviewing guidelines, see
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The paper employs the the approximate message passing
framework recently developed in compressed sensing for the blind
calibration problem. They then use extensive simulations to characterize
the phase transition of their algorithm in the noiseless settings. This is
a nice paper. However, the presentation can be improved a lot. Here are
some suggestions:
(i) The authors are employing the Bayesian
setting where they assume both the signal distribution and distortion
distribution d_\mu are known. However, they don't mention it in Section
1.1. They also never explicitly mention this assumption and one should
realize it from (4). IT will be helpful if they clearly state their
assumptions.
(ii) They never provide any details on the ensemble
of the measurement matrices they are using. Are they spatially coupled?
Are they iid subGaussian? Again stating this clearly in Section 1.1 will
be very helpful.
(iii) Even though the authors cite several papers
that have considered the same calibration problem, it is still helpful to
explain one concrete application and then mention why the assumptions they
are making are correct? For instance it is not clear for the reviewer why
d_\mu is independent of $\ell$. It seems that the distortion should depend
on the measurement and hence on $\ell$.
(iv) The name C-AMP seems
to be used in other message passing papers, for complex-valued signals.
Other names might make the concept more clear.
() Q2: Please summarize your review in
1-2 sentences
Nice paper that requires a revision for clarification
purposes.
Q1:Author
rebuttal: Please respond to any concerns raised in the reviews. There are
no constraints on how you want to argue your case, except for the fact
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however that reviewers and area chairs are very busy and may not read long
vague rebuttals. It is in your own interest to be concise and to the
point.
Dear NIPS committee,
We thank the reviewers
for their valuable feedback, and their overall appreciation of our work.
We will make sure to clarify the ambiguities they raised in the final
version of our paper. Below we wish to comment on the part of the points
made that we consider contestable.
First, we would like to make a
general comment about the "Impact Score", 3 reviewers granted us with
score 1, and 2 with score 2. We would definitely agree that our work is
different from a typical NIPS submission. Its strong side is that (based
on non-rigorous heuristic arguments) we were able to design a very
efficient message-passing based algorithm for a hard inference problem
that resists to more traditional approaches. The weaker side, as basically
all the reviewers pointed out, is that our paper does not include any
theorem proving the performance of the algorithm. Indeed, establishing
such theorems would be a very challenging task. We would be very grateful
if the NIPS committee gave us the opportunity to present this work and
this general direction of research at the conference.
Here is now
a more specific answer:
Reviewer_2 ---------
Reviewer:
"Secondly, as the author mentioned, the derivation of the algorithm
largely follows previous literature [12,13,14,15], and hence the
contribution is mostly adapting previous methods to a new problem, and
appears to be incremental."
Answer: We respectfully disagree. The
derivation of the algorithm is not a trivial generalization of the AMP one
and our updates for the estimates of the distortion parameters are nor
intuitive neither easy to guess. The corresponding graphical model being
more complex than the one corresponding to compressed sensing, the
derivation is instead quite involved. Since we did not have the place to
provide the full derivation and gave instead the references [12,13,14,15]
(where AMP for compressed sensing was derived), we perhaps gave the
(wrong) impression that the generalization was simply an incremental one.
This is not the case. Our approach allowed us to solve efficiently an
inference problem that cannot be solved by a simple generalization of AMP
(as far as we know) and that is firmly resisting other more traditional
ones (convex relaxations etc). Hence it is not true that we barely adapt
an "existing method".
Reviewer_5 ---------
We believe
this reviewer misunderstood the definition of our problem. The blind
calibration problem is more complicated than estimating theta and x from
y=Ax+noise(theta), which would be a simple generalization of compressed
sensing. We believe that his claim that "This is a small extension of the
approach that was used for the standard CS problem." stems from this
misunderstanding.
He correctly states that our validation of the
method is empirical. We have derived the corresponding "state evolution"
already, but since blind calibration is a non-trivial generalization of
the compressed sensing problem, the corresponding equations are
complicated and it is not clear to us at this point if they are amenable
to rigorous analysis such as the one done for "state evolution" for AMP
for compressed sensing. Though empirical, we believe that Figure 3 gives
convincing evidence that our algorithm succeeds with high probability
above the phase transition.
Reviewer_ 6 ---------
We
thank this referee for his supportive comments.
"It is a minor
generalization of previous work ...." we disagree with this statement see
our answer to Reviewer_2.
Lines 150-151, yes there is a misprint
that we will correct. Lines 181-182 will be expanded. Line 228 the running
time is O(MN), we will add more quantitative values.
Reviewer_ 7
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We thank this referee for his supportive comments
and for pointing several places where our paper is unclear, this is
immensely valuable to us and we will adjust the manuscript accordingly.
We would like to clarify one point though: the L1 minimization
algorithm we use as a comparison (used by Gribonval, Chardon and Daudet in
[9]), does take into account calibration (else it could never achieve
perfect recovery), but it is still not as performant as the algorithm we
propose.
Reviewer_ 8 ---------
We also thank this
referee for supportive comments and for pointing several places where our
paper is unclear, in detail:
(i) We will state more clearly our
Bayesian-like assumptions. (ii) We work with iid gaussian measurement
matrices (indeed we expect that using the spatially coupled ones would
further improve the performance). (iii) The different measurements are
indexed by $\mu$. In applications, each $\mu$ can correspond to one
sensor. And the parameter $d_\mu$ is related to the mis-calibration of
that sensor. The index $\ell$ stands for different signal samples that are
used for the blind (unsupervised) calibration, the mis-calibration
parameters do not depend on the sample index, since the measurement
hardware is independent of the realization of the sample. We will give an
example of a specific application in the revised version. (iv) We
realized that the abbreviation C-AMP was used for complex-AMP, we will
hence revise it to Cal-AMP.
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